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Forest of October by alexandre-deschaumes Forest of October by alexandre-deschaumes
A warm october light in the forest . I enjoyed this Reflection creating an old painting feeling .


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This is one of those shots in which photography becomes art. Very few pictures manage it, there are a lot of great photographs that are just great photographs. That's not to take away from great photography, it's really hard to get a great photograph and it's something you should be proud of when you finally pull it off. But that doesn't mean it's art, and in the end, it is art that we're all striving for.

I think other mediums are easier than photography in this regard. (Of course I say this as someone who has never painted anything more artistic than a wall or drawn anything more complicated than the short straw.) Art tells a story, or even better, prompts viewers to tell their own stories to themselves. Other mediums need a story in the creation process so there is already a strong starting point.

This is that rarest of photographs that starts the viewer down a path into a daydream. The daydream doesn't have to be one of slaying dragons and rescuing princesses. Sometimes, as in this case, for at least one viewer, a daydream can be resting against a comfortable tree sipping at a flask of good scotch and reading literature that doesn't take itself too seriously.
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It is a good picture. It’s well taken. You clearly see the face value of what is offered. The reflection is good. The color is good, but is just a little faded (although it feels real.) The detail is ok, it feels a little choppy...it may be the computer. I think I would like a style of some kind added to the picture, examples: burn away the edges, B&W, time machine, ex...

As reflected by my score, the originality buggers me allot. How is this image original, or your own, from what another person would choose to capture if they were there? The other critique is a good one, however how is this artistic? I just don’t seem much personal artistic expression. (I don't mean to be harsh.) To me this just says that you liked the reflection and captured what you saw. It feels rather 2d. Personally I want to see at least 3 subjects, I see only two: fall, and reflection of the lake. Or if not that, at least 3 layers, I see only 2 1/2, the mountain, the edge of the lake, the lake.

There are too may horizontal and vertical lines, some angles I think would really help make it more exciting.

Also consider this, where do your eyes want to go, for me they tried to go up the mountain in the back, but were stopped. Then they tried to go into the edge of the forest by the edge of the lake on the right near the rock or tree in the lake. However everything is too small to appreciate what potential seems to be there.

It is a good picture that I would be proud to have.
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Sakurazuka90 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013
i feel so nice when i look at it :)
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puccadollme Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love it!
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usvakorpi Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I absolutely adore this view. You just keep watching it and can't get enough of the colours, harmony, reflections... I'm glad you took this photo and kept it simple.

In these days many people seek extreme experiences, also from nature. But when did you last time just go into a forest, sit down and listen to the silence? It's not boring - it's meditation and relief.
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alexandre-deschaumes Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Professional Photographer
I agree , even though it's sometimes difficult to appreciate this kind of 'simplicity' . I go myself in 'impressive' areas ( patagonia mountains / iceland .. ) to seek something maybe more .. mysterious . Ethereal . huge . unknown ..
But .. at the same time I often appreciate to go in the woods .. I find a kind of abstract shelter .. in deep forets .. I love Moss .. and It's quite difficult to find a beautiful forest ..

mmh I guess you have some very beautiful woods in finland ?

sorry for my experimental english .
thank for your words .
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usvakorpi Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, of course when you see some absolutely stunning landscape (photo or just happen to be there physically)you just stare at it awestruck. I also respect the effort of people like you who work hard to reach these distant places and show them to the rest of us. But at the same time I enjoy finding ispiration from minimalism and simplicity.

We have some charming forests here in Finland but sadly the forest industry have turned most of them into fields of woods. The very old ones are rare in southern Finland but I've been lucky to see some. I wish that some day I'd be skillful enough to produce more original and professional-like photos of forests (I find it very difficult!).

Don't be sorry for your english. Mine isn't perfect either :)
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alexandre-deschaumes Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Professional Photographer
I completly understand ,

and I also find it very difficult to have a beautiful photograph into the forest .

Thank you.
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JPtHart Featured By Owner May 18, 2012  Student Photographer
Your wonderful work has been featured here: [link] :aww:
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ccherry91 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012
absolutely beautiful! *.*
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BleachTheSky Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012   Writer
Gorgeous capture. :heart:
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:iconannabelle-chabert:
Annabelle-Chabert Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011   Photographer
Mais........ce lac c'est bien celui dont on a parlé !?! :aww:
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:iconalexandre-deschaumes:
alexandre-deschaumes Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011  Professional Photographer
mmmh ?? :) on a parlé de ce petit lac ?
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:iconannabelle-chabert:
Annabelle-Chabert Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011   Photographer
Je me fais peut-être une hallucination mais j'ai pensé au lac petit lac vert du cirque du Fer à Cheval...:confused:
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alexandre-deschaumes Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011  Professional Photographer
ah oui en effet excuse, c'est bien celui là . huum :floating:
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Annabelle-Chabert Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011   Photographer
:happybounce:
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alexandre-deschaumes Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011  Professional Photographer
:la:
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GoldenEyedDragon Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2011
That is why I love Autumn. So Beautiful!!
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DarkBorder Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Beauuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuutifuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuul!
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BeckaMarr Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
This looks like a beautiful painting!
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AdARDurden Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Stunning !! I agree with your description . . . it does feel like a painting !!! Luv it !! :)
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fotottiv Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Professional Photographer
excelente!
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Ajzatsana Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011
It is amazing how beautiful nature. Well, and you managed to photograph it. Wonderful photo:)
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Skybread Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011
This is truly beautiful and has a wonderful warm, autumnal feel to it. I love it.
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MadEmill Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
gorgeous!
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Photopathica Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011   General Artist
beautiful
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shtryga11 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011
Great atmosphere filled with autumn!
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Speck2 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
it feels as if you are there, wonderful capture!!
Cindy
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celene-opalune Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Roooh les couleurs :wow:
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sahk99 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011
Whooo-hoo! a great shot!
It almost looks like a painting.
Additional, the forest seems to be full of Fairies, Pixies and other mysteries
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emmanueldautriche Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011   Photographer
Extra...presque une peinture...:)
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Annabelle-Chabert Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011   Photographer
Mmmmmmh une véritable invitation à la rêverie :faint:
Raaaaaaaaah l'automne, c'est beau à en pleurer... Ce matin je regardais de ma fenêtre les feuillus aux couleurs rouges (les meurisiers) jaunes, oranges et marrons recouverts d'une fine couche de givre et c'était beau !
Bonne journée Alexandre ;-)
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alexandre-deschaumes Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Professional Photographer
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmh
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davincipoppalag Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
very beautiful
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Cantabrigian Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
Defies the rule of thirds and gets away with it elegantly. So warm and tranquil. Nice work Alex.
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RobertFrostII Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
After my own heart....
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SevlowDW Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Reminds me of what is really my first "official" picture. Taken at a local nature preserve when I was in elementary school, and used for a district-wide contest. This photo, of course, is much better than that one. And the "old painting" effect is wonderful. I couldn't properly describe in a paragraph (or several) how awesome this shot is. Definitely a new favorite!
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HisElizabeth Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
So beautifully serene...lovely. I want to live there! :)
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TribalTimbo Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Student General Artist
lakes make amazing pictures!
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GlassHouse-1 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
So lovely and peaceful.
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HellBelleBarbarelle Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
It really does look loike a painting! Reinds me of back home in Pennsylvania were I'm from. Love it!!
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Sparia Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Student General Artist
very calming..
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GradientKing Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Student Digital Artist
wow this looks great!
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Toxodentrail Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great picture!
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mistressvampire99 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Looks so siren and peaceful....Wish I could go there...
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mj-magic Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
gorgeous!! definitely looks like the work of an old master!! :love:
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oceaniclove Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
Nice colors
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Kelihetu Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lovely place. :heart:
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